However, the author fails to flesh out the consequences of these changes.Īnother interesting moment was when Harry gives Snape a Muggle notebook and pen for a Christmas gift. The author does a good job in reaching the obvious implications of Hermione’s death: the lack of interest in the Philosopher’s Stone. Hermione’s death is a very interesting concept as she is instrumental in shaping canon Harry. There are some interesting moments that could make this story very good with major editing. The author interprets everything for the reader and this may be the reason why certain characters, most notably Snape, seem completely dislikable. The whole story reads like a book report. The author tells the readers that Harry feels a certain emotion or learns to feel a certain way due to a previous action. The author tells that the Shaws, the family who adopts Harry, wants Harry as a status son. Throughout the story, the author explains the characters' motives. However, the author might have some plans for future chapters. There doesn’t seem to be any implications or reason for this. The story starts off with a time-skip with baby Harry being left with the Dursleys on November 1st, 2001. I'm personally holding off rating it yet, but I wanted to bring it to peoples attention since it is-when it isn't painfully self-unaware-fairly interesting. ![]() It's paradoxing how shit parts of this story is, and yet there are tiny gems in there that I find interesting.
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